Expressing an opinion-2

     Every year, a lot of animals are taken to use in laboratory experiments, especially on small mice. For the progress, people have experiments on small animals. I’m against this way because every creature has authority to survive. Nobody can take away others’ lives. People are creatures and animals are creatures as well. Why can people experiment on animals for some demands? Maybe some experts say that they are necessaries, but lives are precious. We never consider the feeling of the animals experimented on. I think that experts can replace animals that are not toxic with poisonous animals or reduce experiments on animals. Death is nature, buy everybody should respect authority of creatures’ surviving. Lives are most valuable on earth.

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     Many students have to wear uniform to school every day. In fact, a lot of students don’t like to do that because they think it comfortable to be in sports clothing. Even they are not fond of the design on the uniform. On the contrary, parents think it good for children to wear uniform. Dressing in uniform means discipline. Moreover, those who are dressed in uniform will pay attention to their behavior. I consider that wearing uniform is a better way to confine students’ bad deeds. I don’t dislike to dress in uniform. Besides, we can prevent people we don’t know from entering the school if students dress themselves in uniform. Although lots of students hate to wear uniform, dressing in uniform is what students have to do. Change the ideas, and students will feel better.

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     Of all the sports, I like swimming and hiking best. First of all, swimming is as healthy as hiking. Next, swimming can promote metabolism; hiking can promote metabolism as well. Furthermore, both of them are able to consume calories and they are helpful to lose weight. Most important of all, swimming doesn’t need any implement on hand. Likewise, I don’t have any implement on hand while I go hiking. Besides, I can go swimming or go hiking whenever I want to do exercise. To sum up, I think that the more I exercise, the healthier I will become. There are a lot of advantages if I do exercise.

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     I find that two historic men were alike in several ways. Both of them died on July 4, 1826 but they were born on different day. One of the men was John Adams, who was an important person in the American Revolution. Similarly, the other person was Thomas Jefferson and he was important in the American Revolution. They have studied and practiced law. John Adams had been the President of United States as well as Thomas Jefferson, but John Adams was the second President and Thomas Jefferson was the third President. The former was as a signer of Declaration of Independence as the latter, and the latter was the author of Declaration of Independence as well. John Adams had been delegated to the Continental Congress, which Thomas Jefferson was alike . They were some different. The former was the father of the sixth U.S. president-John Quincy Adams; however, the latter was the foreign minister to France and he founded University of Virginia. He was also philosopher, architect, and inventor. Although they were some difference and some identical ways, they are the important people in history.

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     An interesting thing I find is that there are two shirts and both of them are alike. One of the shirts is in the Lourie’s store and the other one is in the Green’s house. The former is machine washable and cotton blend. Likewise, the latter is machine washable and cotton blend. The size of former ranges from 4 to14, which is similar to the latter. And then they have the same color. To my surprise, not only the shirt of Lourie’s but also the shirt of Green’s costs $34.99. They are both the same except of the origin. This is a special thing that I have ever seen.

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     My friend and I are looking for a department to live in. One day, I found two advertisements on the Internet. After discussing, we would choose Fairfax Apartments rather than Campus Apts for some reasons. First of all, there are two large bedrooms so that I need not to share a room with my friend. Next, the former is furnished, but the latter is unfurnished. Most important of all, I can live with an air conditioner if I choose Fairfax Apartments. Besides, no pet allowed is good for me because I need a quiet environment to let me focus on my studying. Although the price of Fairfax Apartments is higher than Campus Apts, I can share the rent with my roommate, so it doesn’t matter to me. I hope I can live in Fairfax Apartments.

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     I think Debra Fines can be fit to this job because of several reasons. One of the reasons is that Debra has more education than Lynn. It means that Debra has more knowledge to support his teaching. Another reason is that Debra varies in his teaching experience while Lynn has less teaching experience. Debra has been a consultant and author, an instructor, a teaching assistant, and a swimming teacher. However, Lynn has just been a Spanish teacher, an English teacher, and a peace crops volunteer. Moreover, Debra has gone to three universities for studying, but Lynn only has studying in one college. Although Debra doesn’t reap any reward like Lynn does, his resume proved that he is qualified to assume the position. If I am the boss, I will prefer Debra to Lynn.

I don't like rainy days. -revised1

     I like cloudy days, sunny days, and windy days, except for rainy days. It’s because I have to wear a raincoat or carry an umbrella with me if it should rain. I hate to do so. Rainy days prevent me from donig outdoor activities so it is out of the question for me to like the rainy days. I remembered that I rode a bike to my friend’s house and it rained cats and dogs on the way to my destination two months ago. I didn’t have a raincoat so all my clothes got wet because of rain. After I reached the house of my friend's, Peggy,she lent me her shirt and pants. The day was not my day! I’m in a bad mood only when it is a rainy day. I hate to get wet especially in rainy days. Doing everything in a sunny day makes me happy, but doing what I want to do makes me annoyed in a rainy day. Rainy days are the last things that I would like! If I can choose, I hope that every day is a sunny day in stead of a rainy day.