2011年5月18日 星期三

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     My friend and I are looking for a department to live in. One day, I found two advertisements on the Internet. After discussing, we would choose Fairfax Apartments rather than Campus Apts for some reasons. First of all, there are two large bedrooms so that I need not to share a room with my friend. Next, the former is furnished, but the latter is unfurnished. Most important of all, I can live with an air conditioner if I choose Fairfax Apartments. Besides, no pet allowed is good for me because I need a quiet environment to let me focus on my studying. Although the price of Fairfax Apartments is higher than Campus Apts, I can share the rent with my roommate, so it doesn’t matter to me. I hope I can live in Fairfax Apartments.

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  1. Next, the former is furnished, but the latter is unfurnished.
    加個附加論點解釋已裝潢的房子比較好的理由~這樣文章會更豐富喔!
    還滿順暢的~結論句有點怪怪的~太簡潔了一點~

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