After I graduated from junior high school, I studied at Department of Applied Foreign Languages, National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS). I was pleasant to enter this school to let my English improve a lot. That is, I believed that I can learn lots of knowledge about English here. When I was a freshman, I took notes so hard in class so that I could increase my vocabulary by this way. Afterwards, I took notes of key points. Due to this way, I can understand the text fast. I was so lucky to have many such kind classmates. Every time I have problems, I always turned to them and they were always willing to give me a hand. Besides, I thought each teacher who taught us was very hard-working. They offered not only knowledge of textbooks but also more information that we couldn’t get in school to us. I really appreciated the people who have been to help me while I was in senior high school.
2011年9月20日 星期二
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*When I was a freshman, I took notes so hard in class so that I could increase my vocabulary by this way. 覺得by this way 要去掉改very soon
回覆刪除* many such kind classmates 加上such 有點怪
* Every time I have problems 改成had
*I thought each teacher who taught us was very hard-working. Who taught us 覺得可以不用寫..
可以的話你可以加上你除了課業之外的事情,例如:球賽、你學到的事情拉~參考拉~
let my English improve a lot (應該是 improved)
回覆刪除時態不一致~例如 can-->could
who have been to help me (been to???)
an elementary student (加個school應該會比較好)
Due to this way, I can understand the text fast.
回覆刪除摁....我有點沒辦法連貫這句欸怪怪的優
touch後面是接with嗎..