2011年9月20日 星期二

School life (draft)

     After I graduated from junior high school, I studied at Department of Applied Foreign Languages, National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS). I was pleasant to enter this school to let my English improve a lot. That is, I believed that I can learn lots of knowledge about English here. When I was a freshman, I took notes so hard in class so that I could increase my vocabulary by this way. Afterwards, I took notes of key points. Due to this way, I can understand the text fast. I was so lucky to have many such kind classmates. Every time I have problems, I always turned to them and they were always willing to give me a hand. Besides, I thought each teacher who taught us was very hard-working. They offered not only knowledge of textbooks but also more information that we couldn’t get in school to us. I really appreciated the people who have been to help me while I was in senior high school.

     I studied in English very hard, and English is my major subject. I was interested in English as I was an elementary student. I like to listen to English songs to enhance my listening in English. In addition, I was touch with English magazines after I studied in senior high school. By reading magazines, I found my reading ability and vocabulary were better. When I was a freshman, I took the General English Proficiency Test and passed the elementary level. Afterwards, I took the intermediate level of GEPT. Fortunately, I passed it. Having studied in English for three years, my English ability strengthened a lot. I learned a lot in the school. Above all, everything here was my precious memory.

3 則留言:

  1. *When I was a freshman, I took notes so hard in class so that I could increase my vocabulary by this way. 覺得by this way 要去掉改very soon
    * many such kind classmates 加上such 有點怪
    * Every time I have problems 改成had
    *I thought each teacher who taught us was very hard-working. Who taught us 覺得可以不用寫..

    可以的話你可以加上你除了課業之外的事情,例如:球賽、你學到的事情拉~參考拉~

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  2. let my English improve a lot (應該是 improved)
    時態不一致~例如 can-->could
    who have been to help me (been to???)
    an elementary student (加個school應該會比較好)

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  3. Due to this way, I can understand the text fast.
    摁....我有點沒辦法連貫這句欸怪怪的優
    touch後面是接with嗎..

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