Future Perspectives -revised

     I hope I can be admitted to National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology in the future.I will choose English as my major after I enter the university. Although I pass some English proficiency tests, I think my English ability can be better. I want to be admitted to your school because there are great teachers, complete education courses, and a good studying environment in your college. If I can be one of your college students, I will make more efforts to sharpen my English ability. For example, I read English novels and magazines. Furthermore, I like to listen to English songs so that I can learn more vocabulary. These activities can help me improve my English.

     I feel like being an English teacher. By studying in your college, I can learn more about English. Most important of all, you offer good courses that can let me know how to be an English teacher and be a good English teacher. This is what I need. I really hope I can enter your school.

Self-Evaluation -revised

      I’m a warmhearted and friendly girl. I’m always willing to help people because helping people makes me happy. If I can do something to help other people in the world, I will be ready to do so. It’s because I have received a lot of help from my friends, my relatives, and even strangers. I really thank for those people who helped me. I like to see the smile on people’s face due to my help. I do everything carefully so that I can get a good outcome. Furthermore, I do my best to finish everything. I have a positive attitude toward my life. I always look on the bright of my life and smile to everyone. I believe that if I smile to others, they may be infected with my smile. As for my hobbies, I like to listen to music and go out with my friends. By listening to music, I can relax myself from the stress of school. Besides, I love to listen to English songs and repeat what the singer sings so I enhance my English ability a lot by this way. Going out with friends is wonderful for me. Sometimes my friend and I study together in the library, and sometimes we go out and share something in our daily life. We are not only good friends but also good competitors in studies. By this way, I have a motive to study harder.

Self-Evaluation

     I’m a warmhearted and friendly girl. I’m always willing to help people because helping people makes me happy. If I can do something to help other people in the world, I will be ready to do so. It’s because I have been to receive a lot of help from my friends, my relatives, and even strangers. I really thank for those people who helped me. I like to see the smile on people’s face due to my help. I do everything carefully so that I can get a good outcome. Furthermore, I do my best to finish everything. I have a positive attitude toward my life. I always look bright side of life and smile to everyone. I believe that if I smile to others, they may be infected with my smile. My hobbies are to listen to music and go out with my friends. By listening to music, I can relax myself from the stress of school. Besides, I love to listen to English songs and repeat what the singer sings so I enhance my English ability a lot by this way. Going out with friends is wonderful for me. Sometimes my friend and I study together in the library, and sometimes we go out and share something in our daily life. We are not only good friends but also good competitors in studies. By this way, I have a motive to study harder.

Future Perspectives

     I will choose English as my major after I enter the college. Although I pass some English proficiency tests, I think my English ability can be better. I want to be admitted to your school because there are great teachers, complete education courses, and a good studying environment in your college. If I can be one of your college students, I will make more efforts to sharpen my English ability. I read English novels and magazines. Furthermore, I like to listen to English songs so that I can learn more vocabulary. These activities can help me improve my English.

     I feel like being an English teacher. By studying in your college, I can learn more about English. Most important of all, you offer good courses that can let me know how to be an English teacher and be a good English teacher. This is what I need. I really hope I can enter your school.