Future Perspectives -revised

     I hope I can be admitted to National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology in the future.I will choose English as my major after I enter the university. Although I pass some English proficiency tests, I think my English ability can be better. I want to be admitted to your school because there are great teachers, complete education courses, and a good studying environment in your college. If I can be one of your college students, I will make more efforts to sharpen my English ability. For example, I read English novels and magazines. Furthermore, I like to listen to English songs so that I can learn more vocabulary. These activities can help me improve my English.

     I feel like being an English teacher. By studying in your college, I can learn more about English. Most important of all, you offer good courses that can let me know how to be an English teacher and be a good English teacher. This is what I need. I really hope I can enter your school.