I’m a warmhearted and friendly girl. I’m always willing to help people because helping people makes me happy. If I can do something to help other people in the world, I will be ready to do so. It’s because I have been to receive a lot of help from my friends, my relatives, and even strangers. I really thank for those people who helped me. I like to see the smile on people’s face due to my help. I do everything carefully so that I can get a good outcome. Furthermore, I do my best to finish everything. I have a positive attitude toward my life. I always look bright side of life and smile to everyone. I believe that if I smile to others, they may be infected with my smile. My hobbies are to listen to music and go out with my friends. By listening to music, I can relax myself from the stress of school. Besides, I love to listen to English songs and repeat what the singer sings so I enhance my English ability a lot by this way. Going out with friends is wonderful for me. Sometimes my friend and I study together in the library, and sometimes we go out and share something in our daily life. We are not only good friends but also good competitors in studies. By this way, I have a motive to study harder.
*look bright side of life →look on the bright of my life
回覆刪除*My hobbies are to listen to music and go out with my friends. 可以在前面加個詞~As for my hobbies, I~或是Besides, my hobbies are to ~and "to" go out with my friends.(如果你要用這句要記得在go前面加to !!)
If I can do something to help other people in the world, I will be ready to do so. (我覺得用will好像怪怪的耶 可是我不知道怎麼改)
回覆刪除It’s because I have been to receive a lot of help from my friends (i have received...)
look bright side of life --> look on the bright side of life