Describing a person-revised1

     I’m looking for my best friend, Peggy. We went to the library this morning, and we decided to go home in the afternoon. On the way home, she was lost and I couldn’t find her! Please help me to find her. Her looks is slender, petite, and she is about seventeen years old. Her skin is fair. Peggy has curly black hair, big brown eyes, and two dimples on her face. She was dressed in a pink and white shirt and a blue skirt, carrying a bag with her. If anyone finds her, please call me and my number is 0976541388. Thanks a lot.

draft: comparing-2

I find that two historic men are alike in several ways. Both of them died on July 4, 1826 but they were born in different time. One of the men is John Adams, who was important person in the American Revolution. Similarly, the other person is Thomas Jefferson and he was important in the American Revolution. They have been to study and practice law. John Adams has been the President of United States as well as Thomas Jefferson, but John Adams was the second President and Thomas Jefferson was the third President. The former was as a signer of Declaration of Independence as the latter, but the latter was the author of Declaration of Independence as well. John Adams has been to delegate to the Continental Congress, which is alike Thomas Jefferson. They were some different. The former was the father of the sixth U.S. president-John Quincy Adams; however, the latter was the foreign minister to France and he founded University of Virginia. He was also philosopher, architect, and inventor. Although they were some different and some ways which were the same, they are the important people in history.

draft: comparing-1

     A interesting thing I find is that there are two shirts and both of them are alike. One of the shirts is in the Lourie’s store and the other one is in the Green’s house. The former is machine washable and cotton blend. Likewise, the latter is machine washable and cotton blend. The size of former range from 4-14, which is similar to the latter. And then they have the same color. To my surprise, not only the shirt of Lourie’s but also the shirt of Green’s costs $34.99. They are all the same except of the origin. This is special thing that I have ever seen.

I don't like rainy days.

I like cloudy days, sunny days, and windy days, except for rainy days. It’s because I have to wear a raincoat or carry an umbrella with me if it should rain. I hate to do so. Rainy days cause me not to do any outdoor activity so it is out of the question for me to like rainy days. I remembered that I rode a bike to my friend’s house and it rained cats and dogs on the way to my destination. I didn’t have a raincoat so all clothes of mine got wet because of rain. After I reached the house of my friend, my friend, Peggy, lent to me her shirt and pants. The day was not my day! I’m in a bad mood only when it is a rainy day. I hate to get wet especially in rainy days. Doing everything in a sunny day makes me happy, but doing everything makes me annoyed. Rainy days are the last thing that I would like! If I can choose, I hope that every day is sunny day in stead of rainy day.

Describing a Process-(4) how to reduce stress-revised1

Everyone is under the stress from each kind of aspects and I’m no exception. How to relieve our stress is of central importance. Every time I’m in a bad mood, I watch TV or listen to the music to relax. I’m a student and I have some pressure from my schoolwork; I face the exams every day. After I arrive home, the first thing I do is take a shower because it can help me feel well. Afterward, I go to my bedroom, turn on my radio, and lie in my bed. I can find my pressure gradually vanishing when I enjoy listening to music. This is the best way for me to ease off the stress. I think everybody has his/her own way to alleviate the pressure. Healthy body lies in healthy heart so we should make ourselves healthier.  Do you often feel annoyed? I think you have to find ways to let your stress be relieved.

Describing a person

I’m looking for my best friend, Peggy. We went to the library this morning, and we decided to go home in the afternoon. On the way to home, she was lost and I couldn’t find her! Please help me to find her. Her looking is slender, petite, and about seventeen years old. Her skin color is white. Peggy has curly black hair, big brown eyes, and two dimples on her face. She was dressed in a pink and white shirt and a blue skirt, carrying with a bag. If anyone finds her, please call the 0976541388. Thanks a lot.

Describing a Process-(4) how to reduce stress

Every one is under the stress from each kind of aspect and I’m no exception. How to relieve our stress is of central importance. Every time I’m in bad mood, I watch TV or listen to the music to relax. I’m a student and I have some pressure on my school work; I face the exams everyday. After arriving home, the first thing I do is take a shower because it can help me feel good. Afterward, I will go to my bedroom, turn on my radio, and lie in my bed. I can find my pressure fading when I enjoy listening to my music. This is the best way for me to ease off the stress. Everybody must have his/her own way to alleviate the pressure. Healthy body lies in healthy heart and we should make ourselves healthier.  Do you often feel annoyed? I think you have to find ways to let your stress be relieved.