I’m looking for my best friend, Peggy. We went to the library this morning, and we decided to go home in the afternoon. On the way to home, she was lost and I couldn’t find her! Please help me to find her. Her looking is slender, petite, and about seventeen years old. Her skin color is white. Peggy has curly black hair, big brown eyes, and two dimples on her face. She was dressed in a pink and white shirt and a blue skirt, carrying with a bag. If anyone finds her, please call the 0976541388. Thanks a lot.
應該是looks喔!
回覆刪除call the 0976541388感覺怪怪的~
1)Please help me to find her 不用to直接加原型動詞
回覆刪除Please help me to find her(help後面不用加to)
回覆刪除Her looking is slender, petite, and about seventeen years old. (looking不是名詞吧，你這\的主詞是her looking,可是你後面又接about seventeen ~前後主詞應該要不一樣的)
Her skin color is white(不用加color吧)
carrying with a bag(carrying a bag with her會好一點吧)
call the 0976541388(不用the)
On the way to home不用to
回覆刪除最後一行寫call 0976541388就好了
on the way home 不用加to !!
回覆刪除please call my phone number 0976541388感覺比較順~
On the way to home不用to
回覆刪除最後電話那裡怪拐...
On the way to home 不用 to
回覆刪除Her skin color is white 有點怪~應該要寫她的皮膚很白~不是她的皮膚是白色
She was dressed in a pink and white shirt and a blue skirt, carrying with a bag. 要用 is 喔!
Please help me to ~ help後面不用加to
回覆刪除On the way to home ~ 不用to
然後皮膚白應該是light之類的