Best of the semester-3

     Many people around the world ingest too much caffeine by drinking beverage every day, but they don’t know it may do them harm. In fact, there is much caffeine in various kinds of drinks. As far as I am concerned, I think moderate caffeine is good, but too much caffeine would do people harm. First of all, it may cause some physical problems, such as insomnia, nervousness, anxiety, headache, and so on. Furthermore, it may result in nausea or other gastrointestinal problems. That is, maybe those who absorb too much caffeine may want to throw up or have a stomachache. If we have too much caffeine in our body, we will have muscle tremors. According to these reasons, I suggest that people think twice before they drink beverage which contains caffeine. We should protect ourselves from being hurt by caffeine.

Best of the semester-2

I found a job and I had a chance to interview the manager. After talking to the manager, I went home and I discussed the problem whether I should accept this job or not with my parents. This was my first job, so I considered this problem carefully and I decided to adopt this job for some reasons after discussing with my parents.

First of all, I have not been a student since I graduated from school. Afterward, I had to raise myself rather than depend on my parents. Moreover, if I made money by myself, I would be able to buy more expensive goods. That is, I must have money so that I could buy what I wanted. Additionally, I was satisfied with the salary of this job and I didn’t have to wear uniform to work. Most important of all, my parents had become older and older and they can't work in the future. Thus, I wanted to reduce their financial burden, so I need to get a job to earn money. In addition, I wanted to save some money so that I could take advantage of money to let my family go abroad. Thanks to my parents for bringing me up. Finally, I took the job and I worked very hard. I hope that I can earn a lot of money as soon as possible.

Best of the semester-1

     My uncle decided to open a large factory in Acton and he told me this thing. I told him that I had an idea about his decision. As far as I am concerned, I disagreed with this decision for some reasons. One of the reasons was pollution. Although some people considered it a good idea to give opportunities of jobs to residents, I thought that establishing a factory may result in polluted water, harmful air, and industrial noise. These factors had influences on humans’ body. For example, if people breathed dirty air, their health would go from bad to worse gradually. Furthermore, industrial noise could bring about the impact on hearing of people; even it could turn out be hearing impaired. Another reason was the traffic problem. Because of jobs, the town might be crowded by the people’s cars and people. For the reasons above, I objected to this decision. Finally, my uncle didn't establish a factory in Acton after he found another new place which was better to build his factory. 

Discussing effects-2(revised)

     My uncle decided to set a large factory in Acton and he told me this thing. I told him that I had an idea about his decision. As far as I am concerned, I disagreed with his decision for some reasons. One of the reasons was pollution. Although some people considered it a good idea to give opportunities of jobs to residents, I thought that establishing a factory may result in water polluted, harmful air, and industrial noise. These factors had influences on humans’ body. For example, if people breathed dirty air, their health would go from bad to worse. Furthermore, industrial noise could bring about the impact on people's hearing; even it could turn out be hearing impaired. Another reason was the traffic problem. Because of jobs, the town might be crowded by the people’s cars and people. For the reasons above, I objected to this decision.

Discussing effect-1 (revised)

     Many people around the world ingest too much caffeine by drinking beverage every day, but they don’t know it may do them harm. In fact, there is much caffeine in various kinds of drinks. As far as I am concerned, I think moderate caffeine is good, but too much caffeine would do people harm. First of all, it may cause some physical problems, such as insomnia, nervousness, anxiety, headache, and so on. Furthermore, it may result in nausea or other gastrointestinal problems. That is, maybe those who absorb too much caffeine may want to throw up or have a stomachache. If we have too much caffeine in our body, we will have muscle tremors. According to these reasons, I suggest that people think twice before they drink beverage which contains caffeine. We should protect ourselves from being hurt by caffeine.

Discussing Cause-2revised1

     Michael Williams opened a small music store selling compact discs on September 5, but he closed his shop about one month later. His shop operated not so well, so he was forced to shut it up. Here were some reasons for why he couldn't run his business.
     First of all, the shop's location was 3 miles away from a shopping center that had two large music stores. A large music store could provide customers with many kinds of music while a small music shop only can launch a few kinds of music to clients. Moreover, most of the people living in Fairfax Apartment were at the age of more than forty;these people tend to listen to lyric music rather than hip-hop or rock. Another reason was that  the shop's opening time.The shop only opened from Monday to Friday at 1 to 5 P.M. and people had to work during the week except for Saturday and Sunday, so they would go shopping on the weekend instead of weekdays. That is, customers may not go shopping in the Michael Williams's store during the opening time of the store. If the shopkeeper wanted to make money, he/she should open the store on the weekend.  Last but not the least, that Mr.Willians would not accept checks or credit cards could cause clients to reduce their desires to go into the store and purchase the goods.

Discussing Cause-1 revised1

I found a job and I had a chance to interview the manager. After talking to the manager, I went home and I discussed the problem whether I should accept this job or not with my parents. This is my first job, so I considered this problem carefully and I decided to accept this job for some reasons after I finished discussing with my parents.

First of all, I have not been a student since I graduated from school. I have to raise myself rather than depend on my parents. Moreover, if I can make money by myself, I will be able to buy more expensive goods. That is, I must have money so that I can buy what I wanted. Additionally, I am satisfied with the salary of this job and I don’t have to wear uniform to work. Most important of all, my parents will become older and older can't work in the future. Thus, I want to reduce their financial burden, so I need to get a job to earn money. To sum up, accepting this job is the better choice for me, so I accept it.

Discussing effects-2

    

     My uncle decided to open a large factory in Acton. As far as I was concerned, I disagreed with this decision for some reasons. One of the reasons was pollution. Although some people considered it a good idea to give opportunities of jobs to residents, I thought that establishing a factory may result in polluted water, harmful air, and industrial noise. These factors had influences on humans’ body. For example, if people breathed dirty air, their health would go from bad to worse gradually. Furthermore, industrial noise could bring about the impact on hearing of people; even it could turn out be hearing impaired. Another reason was the traffic problem. Because of jobs, the town might be crowded by the people’s cars and people. For the reasons above, I objected to this decision.

Expressing an opinion-2 revised1

     Every year, a lot of animals are taken to use in laboratory experiments, especially on small mice. For pursuing the progress, people have experiments on small animals. I’m against this way because every creature has authority to survive.I think experts should not expropriate animals' life of surviving just for the  experiments because nobody can take away others’ lives. Moreover, People are creatures and animals are creatures as well. Why can people experiment on animals for some demands? Maybe some experts say that they are necessaries, but lives are precious. We never consider the feeling of the animals experimented on.For these reasons, I think that maybe experts can reduce experiments on animals if they have to carry out experiments. Death is nature, buy everybody should respect authority of creatures’ surviving. Lives are most valuable on earth, so I hope that experts can stop conducting experiments on animals.

Expressing an opinion-1 revised1

     Many students have to wear uniforms to school every day,and a lot of students don’t like to do that because they think wearing sport clothing is more comfortable. Even they are not fond of the design on the uniform. On the contrary, parents think it good for children to wear uniform as they think children may have self-control if they do that. I agree that students wear uniforms to school. Dressed in uniform means discipline. Moreover, those who are dressed in uniform will pay attention to their behavior. I consider that wearing uniform is a better way to confine students’ bad deeds. I agree to dress in uniform to school. Besides, we can prevent people we don’t know from entering the school if students dress themselves in uniform. Although lots of students hate to wear uniform, dressing in uniform is what students have to do. Change the ideas and let students wear what they want, and students will feel better.

Discussing effect-1

     Many people around the world drink a lot of beverage which is rich in caffeine every day, but they don’t know it may do them harm. In fact, there is much caffeine in various kinds of drinks. As far as I am concerned, I think moderate caffeine is good, but too much caffeine would do people harm. First all, it may cause some physical problems, such as insomnia, nervousness, anxiety, headache, and so on. Furthermore, it may result in nausea or other gastrointestinal problems. That is, maybe those who absorb too much caffeine might want to throw up or have a stomachache. If we have too much caffeine in our body, we will have muscle tremors. According to these reasons, I suggest that people think twice before they drink beverage. We should protect ourselves from being hurt by caffeine.

contrasting-2-revised

     There are two people sent resumes to apply for a new English instructor in my friend's school and my friend ask me for which person that he should choose to hire.I tell him that I think Debra Fines is fit to this job because of several reasons. One of the reasons is that Debra has more education than Lynn. It means that Debra has more knowledge to support his teaching. Another reason is that Debra varies in his teaching experience while Lynn has less teaching experience. Debra has been a consultant and author, an instructor, a teaching assistant, and a swimming teacher. However, Lynn has just been a Spanish teacher, an English teacher, and a peace crops volunteer. Moreover, Debra has gone to three universities for studying, but Lynn only has studying in one college. Although Debra doesn’t reap any reward like Lynn does, his resume proved that he was qualified to assume the position. If I were my friend, I would choose Debra rather than Lynn.

Comparing-3 -revised1

     Of all the sports, I like swimming and hiking best and they are similar in some ways. First of all, swimming is as healthy as hiking. Next, swimming can promote metabolism; hiking can promote metabolism as well. Furthermore, both of them  can help me consume calories and they are helpful to lose weight. Most important of all, swimming doesn’t need any implement on hand. Likewise, I don’t have any implement on hand while I go hiking. Besides, I can go swimming or go hiking whenever I want to do exercise. To sum up, there are some similarities between swimming and hiking. Swimming and hiking are good ways to let our body become healthier.

Discussing Cause-2

     Michael Williams opened a small music store selling compact discs on September 5, but he closed his shop about one month later. His shop operated not so well, so he was forced to shut up it. Here were some reasons for that he couldn't run his business.
     First of all, the shop's location was 3 miles away from a shopping center that had two large music stores. A large music stores can provide customers with lots of kinds of music while a small music shop only can launch a few kinds of music to clients. Moreover, most of the people living in Fairfax Apartment were at the age of more than forty;these people trended to listen to lyric music rather than hip-hop or rock. Another reason was that  the shop's opening time.The shop was only open Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 P.M. People had to work during the week except for Saturday and Sunday, and they would go shopping on the weekend. If the shopkeeper wanted to make money, he/she should open the store at that time.  Last but not the least, that Mr.Willians would not accept checks or credit cards could cause clients to reduce their desires of going into the store and purchasing the goods.

Discussing Cause-1

I found a job and I had a chance to interview the manager. After talking to the manager, I went home and I discussed the problem whether I should accept this job or not with my parents. They told me that it depended on me. This is my first job, so I considered this problem carefully and I decided to accept this job for some reasons.

First of all, I have not been a student since I graduated from school. I had to raise myself rather than depended on my parents. Moreover, if I could make money by myself, I would be able to buy more expensive goods. That is, I must have money so that I could buy what I wanted. Additionally, it was good for me that the salary of this job satisfied me and I didn’t have to wear uniform to work. Most important of all, my parents had aged and they day they can’t work anymore will come in the future. Thus, I wanted to reduce their financial burden, so I needed to get a job to earn money. To sum up, accepting this job is the better choice for me, so I accepted it.