Best of the semester-3

     Many people around the world ingest too much caffeine by drinking beverage every day, but they don’t know it may do them harm. In fact, there is much caffeine in various kinds of drinks. As far as I am concerned, I think moderate caffeine is good, but too much caffeine would do people harm. First of all, it may cause some physical problems, such as insomnia, nervousness, anxiety, headache, and so on. Furthermore, it may result in nausea or other gastrointestinal problems. That is, maybe those who absorb too much caffeine may want to throw up or have a stomachache. If we have too much caffeine in our body, we will have muscle tremors. According to these reasons, I suggest that people think twice before they drink beverage which contains caffeine. We should protect ourselves from being hurt by caffeine.

Best of the semester-2

I found a job and I had a chance to interview the manager. After talking to the manager, I went home and I discussed the problem whether I should accept this job or not with my parents. This was my first job, so I considered this problem carefully and I decided to adopt this job for some reasons after discussing with my parents.

First of all, I have not been a student since I graduated from school. Afterward, I had to raise myself rather than depend on my parents. Moreover, if I made money by myself, I would be able to buy more expensive goods. That is, I must have money so that I could buy what I wanted. Additionally, I was satisfied with the salary of this job and I didn’t have to wear uniform to work. Most important of all, my parents had become older and older and they can't work in the future. Thus, I wanted to reduce their financial burden, so I need to get a job to earn money. In addition, I wanted to save some money so that I could take advantage of money to let my family go abroad. Thanks to my parents for bringing me up. Finally, I took the job and I worked very hard. I hope that I can earn a lot of money as soon as possible.

Best of the semester-1

     My uncle decided to open a large factory in Acton and he told me this thing. I told him that I had an idea about his decision. As far as I am concerned, I disagreed with this decision for some reasons. One of the reasons was pollution. Although some people considered it a good idea to give opportunities of jobs to residents, I thought that establishing a factory may result in polluted water, harmful air, and industrial noise. These factors had influences on humans’ body. For example, if people breathed dirty air, their health would go from bad to worse gradually. Furthermore, industrial noise could bring about the impact on hearing of people; even it could turn out be hearing impaired. Another reason was the traffic problem. Because of jobs, the town might be crowded by the people’s cars and people. For the reasons above, I objected to this decision. Finally, my uncle didn't establish a factory in Acton after he found another new place which was better to build his factory. 

Discussing effects-2(revised)

     My uncle decided to set a large factory in Acton and he told me this thing. I told him that I had an idea about his decision. As far as I am concerned, I disagreed with his decision for some reasons. One of the reasons was pollution. Although some people considered it a good idea to give opportunities of jobs to residents, I thought that establishing a factory may result in water polluted, harmful air, and industrial noise. These factors had influences on humans’ body. For example, if people breathed dirty air, their health would go from bad to worse. Furthermore, industrial noise could bring about the impact on people's hearing; even it could turn out be hearing impaired. Another reason was the traffic problem. Because of jobs, the town might be crowded by the people’s cars and people. For the reasons above, I objected to this decision.

Discussing effect-1 (revised)

     Many people around the world ingest too much caffeine by drinking beverage every day, but they don’t know it may do them harm. In fact, there is much caffeine in various kinds of drinks. As far as I am concerned, I think moderate caffeine is good, but too much caffeine would do people harm. First of all, it may cause some physical problems, such as insomnia, nervousness, anxiety, headache, and so on. Furthermore, it may result in nausea or other gastrointestinal problems. That is, maybe those who absorb too much caffeine may want to throw up or have a stomachache. If we have too much caffeine in our body, we will have muscle tremors. According to these reasons, I suggest that people think twice before they drink beverage which contains caffeine. We should protect ourselves from being hurt by caffeine.

Discussing Cause-2revised1

     Michael Williams opened a small music store selling compact discs on September 5, but he closed his shop about one month later. His shop operated not so well, so he was forced to shut it up. Here were some reasons for why he couldn't run his business.
     First of all, the shop's location was 3 miles away from a shopping center that had two large music stores. A large music store could provide customers with many kinds of music while a small music shop only can launch a few kinds of music to clients. Moreover, most of the people living in Fairfax Apartment were at the age of more than forty;these people tend to listen to lyric music rather than hip-hop or rock. Another reason was that  the shop's opening time.The shop only opened from Monday to Friday at 1 to 5 P.M. and people had to work during the week except for Saturday and Sunday, so they would go shopping on the weekend instead of weekdays. That is, customers may not go shopping in the Michael Williams's store during the opening time of the store. If the shopkeeper wanted to make money, he/she should open the store on the weekend.  Last but not the least, that Mr.Willians would not accept checks or credit cards could cause clients to reduce their desires to go into the store and purchase the goods.

Discussing Cause-1 revised1

I found a job and I had a chance to interview the manager. After talking to the manager, I went home and I discussed the problem whether I should accept this job or not with my parents. This is my first job, so I considered this problem carefully and I decided to accept this job for some reasons after I finished discussing with my parents.

First of all, I have not been a student since I graduated from school. I have to raise myself rather than depend on my parents. Moreover, if I can make money by myself, I will be able to buy more expensive goods. That is, I must have money so that I can buy what I wanted. Additionally, I am satisfied with the salary of this job and I don’t have to wear uniform to work. Most important of all, my parents will become older and older can't work in the future. Thus, I want to reduce their financial burden, so I need to get a job to earn money. To sum up, accepting this job is the better choice for me, so I accept it.